批改符号说明：

绿底为优美，黄底为瑕疵，红底为错字（括号里边为间批），中间横线为删除，^{上标符号添加字}，文下隔行写点评，点评内容用红字，红双线“‖”处段另起（分段）.

 

On the Importance of a Name

发布时间：2012-12-20 23:32:54 作者： 发布者：746543815 浏览次数：4821  类别：英文作文  

At present, there is a heated discussion on the importance of a name. opinions vary from person to person. Some individuals attach great importance to names on the grounds that a good name benefits us a lot. Some even hold the view that a name has something to do with one’s success. At the same time, some people are of the opinion that names don’t matter and they are mere marks used to distinguish us from others.

To my mind, balancing the two sides, I tend to the former one. As a symbol of an indicidual, a name is usually endowed with specific meaning or it symbols a certain expection. To a large extent, good name can stimulate one to promote him or her all the life. It’s not uncommon to see one whose name sounds ambitious achieved great success. And it won’t surprise you to find people with tendering names turn out to be a kind person. Obviously, a name help shape ones image and character.

From above mentioned, we can come to a safe conclusion that name is essential for us in our whole life. Undoubtly, it’s necessary for us to design a good name for the next generation.

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/1/5 21:14:14
  点评指数：
  点评内容：
  

  At present, there is a heated discussion on the importance of a name. opinions vary （vary是名词，用形容词various，前加are）from person to person. Some individuals attach great importance to names on the grounds that a good name benefits us a lot. Some even hold the view that a name has something to do with one’s success. At the same time, some people are of （改为hold更简洁）the opinion that names don’t matter and they are mere marks _and used to distinguish us from others.

  To my mind, balancing the two sides, （改为After compareing wiht two aspects.)I tend to the former one. As a symbol of an indicidual, a name is usually endowed with specific meaning or it symbols a certain expection. To a large extent, good names can stimulate one to promote him or her all the life. It’s not uncommon to see one whose name sounds ambitious achieved great success. And it won’t surprise (用surprising加that）you to find people with tendering names turn out to be a kind person. Obviously, a name help shape ones image and character.

  From above mentioned, we can come to a safe （用safe一词强调不恰当）conclusion that _a name is essential for us in our whole life. Undoubtly, it’s necessary for us to design a good name for the next generation.

  此作者至少通过了大学英语四级考试，且在500分左右。