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英语在线作文批改 师生互动情意更浓
黄山镇小学生英语作文采取教师命题作文与学生自由作文相结合的作文形式，师生共借“作文批改网”这一网络平台，让学生随时在平台上发表作文，多位指导老师在线修改。平台提供积分、推荐及评奖功能，加之教师的鼓励性语言的评价，让学生带着兴趣做作文，真正做到有感而发，将写作变成一种需求，将写作变为一种习惯，将批阅视为一种交流。既提高了学生的写作兴致，又拉近了师生之间的感情距离，增加了师生深厚情谊。
My weekend
发布时间：2012-10-28 12:07:01 作者：乔士玲 发布者：qiaoshiling 浏览次数：139 优秀指数：★★★★★★
[小学六年级] 山东省 >> 临沂市 >, > 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇安头小学
Hi, this is your friend Qiao Shi Ling. Iam going to have a busy weekend !
On Saturday monning, Iam going to the supermarret. Iam going to buy some foods. In the afternoon, I'm going to boorstore . I am going to buy a coimc book . On Sunday afternoon , Iam going to visit my aunt. We are going to watch TV together. That will be fun ! What about you ? What are you going to do on the weekend?
批改教师：冯琼 ( 作文批改网 >> 优秀教师 )
批改时间：2012-10-31 10:58:25
点评指数：★★★
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Hi, this is your friend Qiao Shi Ling. I am going to have a busy weekend !
On Saturday monning(morning), Iam going to the supermarret. I am going to buy some foods. In the afternoon, I'm going to the boorstore . I am going to buy a coimc book . On Sunday afternoon , I am going to visit my aunt. We are going to watch TV together. That will be fun ! What about you ? What are you going to do on the weekend?
&, lt;, FONT size=3>Your weekend is busy and funny. 好好利用周末，做些有意义的事情，充实自己的生活，劳逸结合。
My Weekend
发布时间：2012-10-26 18:0, 3:04 作者：杨传静 发布者：yangchuanjing 浏览次数：112 优秀指数：★★★
[小学六年级, , , <, /SPAN>] 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇安头小学
Hi ,I'm yangchuanjing. I'm giong to have
a busy weekend! on Saturday. I'm going to
visit my grandperents. Then, in the evening,
I'm going to the supermarket with my favourite firend. on Sunday, I'm going to the bookstor. I'm going to buy a comic book
and dictionary. what about you ? what are you going to do on the weekend ?
批改教师：冯琼 ( 作文批改网 >> 优秀教师 )
批改时间：2012-10-31 11:06:03
点评指数：★★
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Hi ,I'm yang(Yang) Chuanjing. I'm giong to have a busy weekend! on(On) Saturday.(,) I'm going to visit my grandperents(grandparents). Then, in the evening,I'm going to the supermarket with my favourite firend. on(On) Sunday, I'm going to the bookstor(bookstore). I'm going to buy a comic book and a dictionary. wha(What) about you ? what(What) are you going to do on the weekend ?
Chuanjing, you are great!以后写作时不要着急，注意一些小错误，你会更优秀的！加油吧！
I like Thursday
发布时间：2012-10-03 17:45:18 作者：乔国茜 发布者：qiaoguoqian 浏览次数：108 优秀指数：★
[小学五年级] 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇安头小学
Today is Wednesday.Hmm....we have English,Chinese,art and math.Wait!Tomorrow is Thursday. We have science, computer,music and art.I like , Thursday. And you?
批改教师：冯琼 ( 作文, 批改网 >> 优秀教师 )
批改时间：2012-10-6 21:56:13
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Today is, Wednesday.Hmm....we have &, amp;, amp;, lt;, B st, yle="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal" ,>English,Chinese,art and math.Wait!Tomorrow is Thursday. We have science, computer,music and <, /B,><, B , tyle,=", ms, o-bidi-font-weight: normal" s,,>art.I<,, ;, /S,, , , , , , , , , PAN><, B styl, e="m, so-bidi-, , , , , , , , font-weight: normal"> , , , , ; like Thursday(s). And you?
Guoqian,I like school days because we have a lot of fun.Everyday is new and nice,enjoy your days.
My favourite season
发布时间：2012-09-30 09:41:06 作者：刘祥娣 发布者：liuxiangdi 浏览次数：149 优秀指数：★
[小学六年级] 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇安头小学
My favourite season is spring.
Because Ican, fly kites and plant trees.
The weather is warm and windy.
I don not like summer.
It is too cold.
批改教师：冯琼 ( 作文批改网 >> 优秀教师 )
批改时间：2012-10-6 21:49:21
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My favourite season is spring.
Because Ican fly kites and plant trees.
The weather is warm and windy.
I don(do) not like summer.
It is too cold(hot).
Xiangdi,you are a super girl.Come on!
My new room
发布时间：2012-12-22 17:52:56 作者：乔国茜 发布者：qiaoguoqian 浏览次数：30 优秀指数：★★★★★
[小学五年级] 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇安头小学
&, ;nbs, p;, &n, bsp; My new <, /SPAN>room
Oh! I have my room. It’s big and nice. There is a new mirror, a big bed and a big air—conditioner. It’s cool. I have my old computer, but I love my computer. There are pink curtains and two big eng tables. The many books are on the shelf.
The green closet is near the big table. Many clothes are in the closet. The yellow trash bin is behind the door.
Do you like my new room? What’s your room like? Can you tell me,please?
批改教师：冯琼 ( 作文批改网 >> 优秀教师 )
批改时间：2012-12-27 14:20:34
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My new room
Oh! I have my own room. It’s big and nice. There is a new mirror, a big bed and a big air—conditioner. It’s cool. I have my old computer, but I love my computer. There are pink curtains and two big eng（end）tables. the
many （Many）books are on the shelf.
The green closet is near the big table. Many clothes are in the closet. The yellow trash bin , is behind the door.
Do you like my new room? What’s your room like? Can you tell me,please?
国茜真棒，老师看了你的房间描述，都想去看看了。加油1 | 
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